I am pleased with your story you worked hard. You need to remember your finger spaces in all of your work.
Miss Wilson
Sunday, 13 May 2012
message in a bottle
I am pleased with my neat writing and full stops.
I need to work on my finger spaces.
:|
Thursday, 3 May 2012
Well done
Well done ! you managed to review your work well and worked hard to type up your comment. I agree with you , I think your poem was a great piece of work and you should be very proud.
Miss Wilson
Miss Wilson
Wednesday, 2 May 2012
Seashore senses poem
Story: seashore senses poem
I am pleased that I put in my capital letters and full stops.
Next time I will remember to keep my writing on the line.
:)
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