Sunday, 13 May 2012

Your message in a bottle

I am pleased with your story you worked hard. You need to remember your finger spaces in all of your work.

Miss Wilson

message in a bottle


I am pleased with my neat writing and full stops.
I need to work on my finger spaces.

:|

Thursday, 3 May 2012

Well done

Well done ! you managed to review your work well and worked hard to type up your comment. I agree with you , I think your poem was a great piece of work and you should be very proud.

Miss Wilson

Wednesday, 2 May 2012

Seashore senses poem

Story: seashore senses poem I am pleased that I put in my capital letters and full stops. Next time I will remember to keep my writing on the line. :)